The graph compares the number of people who visited 5 attractions in Parkvale city between 1996 and 2016
The line graph illustrates the quantities of tourists in thousands to 5 different visiting points in Parkvale city between 1996 and 2016.
Overall
, the National Gallery was the most popular venue by far since 2000, although
the Indigenous Art Centre became more popular in 2016. While
fewer visitors went to the aquarium and zoo over two decades, the museum maintained the number of tourists consistently.
To start with, there were two tourist spots, the National Gallery and the museum, that demonstrated an increasing trend over 20 years. In the first place, as for the National Gallery, the number of visitors was more than three times at
the beginning from approximately 300,000 to more than 900,000. In the second place, there was a dramatic increase in Change the preposition
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number of people visiting the Indigenous Art Centre from nearly 0 to more than 300,000.
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On the other hand
, the state zoo and aquarium showed a sharply decreasing trend between 1996 and 2000 and a steady decrease afterwards. Both of them reached around 100,000 visitors in 2016. Meanwhile, the popularity of the museum remained unchanged with slightly above 400,000 tourists every year from 1996 to 2016.Submitted by sonyso on
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