The diagrams below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today.
The maps provided illustrate the layout of Grange
Park
in 1920,
when it was established and how it is today.
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Overall
, the park
has undergone substantial changes and re-arrangements since it was first opened and what stand
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stands
the
both plans is that many new facilities were added like Remove the article
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amphitheatre
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an amphitheatre
children's
playground and a small restaurant.
In 1990, a fountain was located in the Correct article usage
a children's
center
which has been replaced by a rose garden surrounded by seats that have been moved from all edges of the ground in the recent map. Change the spelling
centre
Along with
that, an amphitheatre for concerts has been constructed in place of the stage for musicians. An underground car park
has been built in
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the
below the Correct article usage
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park
, the entrance for which is from the lower right side just behind the new water feature which was added replacing the glasshouse.
On the far end eastern corner of the recreational ground, a children's play area has been made where there used to be a pond for aquatic plants. Similarly
, a cafe stands near that
where a rose garden was situated in 1990. Correct pronoun usage
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Moreover
, other rose gardens were also
removed leaving the one above the amphitheatre.Submitted by Beebleei
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