The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007
The line graph presents data on the number of
visitors
to three distinct types of destinations in European countries from 1987 to 2007.
Overall
, it is evident that coastal areas
were the most popular choice for tourists, with mountain destinations being the least preferred.
In 1987, the coastal regions attracted approximately 40 thousand visitors
, a figure comparable to the combined number of tourists visiting mountains and lakes
. However
, by 1992, the coastal areas
surpassed mountains and became the second most visited type of destination, while
the lakes
showed significant growth
and took the lead. This
growth
continued steadily, reaching a peak of around 75 thousand visitors
in 2007, making lakes
the most sought-after places.
Conversely
, mountain destinations experienced steady growth
until 1997, remaining relatively stable thereafter
. Coastal areas
also
demonstrated consistent growth
and reached their highest point at the end
of the period, maintaining their popularity.
In 2002, the number of visitors
to lakes
declined to around 50 thousand, while
coastal areas
witnessed a slight increase.Submitted by @ur_davrik
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