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Last week, you celebrated your birthday with some friends in a restaurant. It was a great success and you and your friends enjoyed yourselves very much. Write a letter to the restaurant. In your letter mention the food and service explain that you really enjoyed the atmosphere suggest any improvements to make things better

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Dear Sir, I am writing in regards to express my gratitude towards the food and service provided on my birthday June 5th. I hosted my birthday celebration with some close friends in your restaurant and it was a great success. I and my friends have thoroughly enjoyed yourselves very much.
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, I have a request for a customised cake and food with
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 specials with a notice of one week. Still, your restaurant has taken care of it and provided everything with great service on time without any quality compromise.
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, your team has taken care of outside candlelight seating decoration and I really appreciated the gesture. I have thoroughly enjoyed that atmosphere.
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, I would like to suggest that washroom sanitary needs to be improved. There was a lack of liquid soap and tissue paper.
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 made it difficult to stay hygienic.
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, please look into
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 issue seriously. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours Sincerely, Mayuri

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Logical Structure
Ensure that the subject of each paragraph is clear. The paragraph discussing food and atmosphere could be separated for more clarity.
Greeting and Closing
Add a warm closing thank you or compliment to the restaurant to create a more friendly tone.
Logical Structure
Clear organization with paragraphs addressing individual points as per the requirements.
Suitable Writing Tone
The tone of the letter is appreciative and polite, which suits the task of writing to a restaurant.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • exceptional service
  • culinary delights
  • intriguing ambiance
  • meticulous attention
  • flavorful concoctions
  • impeccable presentation
  • charming decor
  • ambient music
  • constructive feedback
  • vegetarian options
  • seating arrangement
  • heartfelt appreciation
  • wholeheartedly recommend
  • return visit
  • enhance the experience
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