Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicine and treatment instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a Positive or a negative development?

It is undeniably true that as long as society evolves it will generate

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contradictory

opinions on the importance of traditional medicine and less researched solutions.

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essay shall analyse the importance of receiving proper medical investigation and medication that can help the patient in treating the health condition. On one hand,

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medical progress has been facing multiple challenges because of the cultural aspect. Most of the underdeveloped countries are prioritising rituals or traditional cures without being sustained by medical references. The main

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consequence

consequences

is determined by the precedents. As long as the patients can be treated by

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solutions and individuals that do not

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a medical degree,

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shall contribute to a negative development of the medicine.

On the other hand

, alongside the progress in the medical field, the industry incurred higher costs which are

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the worldwide inflation rates.

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, nowadays, people are forced to balance their life expenses

while

managing to take care of

theirselves

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. If the health condition is not prioritized and evaluated by a professional,

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doctors

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, it may determine additional costs.

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expenses could be avoided if

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society understands the importance of prevention.

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, as

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society evolves alongside medical progress, the development of

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should be

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undoubtedly

supported irrelevant of cultural and financial

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.

Nevertheless

, prevention should be considered a dominant aspect

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overcoming

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health problems.