You have heard about a plan to build new apartments in a public park near your home. You want to give your opinion about this. Write a letter to the local council . In your letter: ➢ Explain how you and your family use the park ➢ explain why the park is important for the local society ➢ Describe the possible effects on local people if the park is destroyed?

Dear Sir, I am writing in regards with the
plannig
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planning
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new
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residential building in the
park
.In my opinion,
this
is not a vital decision. Me and my family members spend most of our leisure time in the
park
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Additionally
,children
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to play in the open area.
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,it is a good hangout place for my parents. Parks play a vital role in every community,they are good
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for rehabilitation. These days many people are hosting their cultural events in the
park
.
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is
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venue for
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cultutral
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cultural
fest.
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spot for socialising . Destroying parks will have
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effect on
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society.Many people and pets will suffer
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mentall
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mental
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children.
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, people will
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the
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community engagement .Considering all these points I request you to take
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decision. Thanking you, Yours faithfully, Vikram.
Submitted by vicky.kallem on

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