The two maps below show changes to the town of Somerville over a 10-year period.

The two maps below show changes to the town of Somerville over a 10-year period.
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The maps illustrate how the town of Somerville transformed during the period of ten years.
It is clear that
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the main
road
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changed its direction to the east and the region experienced a dramatic change in terms of commercial zones
as well as
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public facilities. Regarding
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the first map, there was nothing
in particular
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, except the main
road
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from northeast to southwest and two
car
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parking zones on both sides
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of
the
road
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.
First,
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the straight main
road
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which was ten years ago,was reconstructed and made way for the
car
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park, which remained the same,but replaced the name.
Moreover
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, a golf course was established in the east next to the
car
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park and along the
road
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.
Secondly
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, on the western side,
car
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park 1 was removed and converted into a visible entertainment area.
Furthermore
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, a new footpath was constructed along a whole area, where restaurants, a cafe,and a bookstore were built in the south-west .
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, two hotels appeared along the river bank surrounded by footpaths on both sides. Two shops were located opposite each other between the cafe and the bookstore.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words road, car with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Town
  • Changes
  • Ten-year period
  • Maps
  • Introduction
  • General description
  • Comparison
  • Specific areas
  • Development
  • Conclusion
  • Urbanization
  • Expansion
  • Infrastructure
  • Residential
  • Commercial
  • Public facilities
  • Roads
  • Green spaces
  • Population growth
  • Transportation
  • Aesthetic
  • Proximity
  • Accessibility
  • Modernization
  • Renovation
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