Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Many individuals believe that losing special
species
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of flora and fauna
are
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the most important environmental
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problems
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problem
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.
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, some people claim that
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the extiction
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extiction
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extinction
of animals and plants
are
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not as important as other environmental
problems
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such
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as
,
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air pollution and global warming. In
this
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topic, we will discuss
about
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the importance of environmental
problems
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in order before a detailed conclusion. Nowadays, we face numerous environmental
problems
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in our society.
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, air pollution is one of the most crucial
problem
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problems
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that we have. If we do not tackle that, we may have
a
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serious damage
for
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to
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species
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the species
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who live with us.
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, global warming may
caused
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cause
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drought in our lands and if
this
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happen
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happens
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for a long time, a lot of
species
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are put in the bring of
extiction
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extinction
.
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, we must take care of our
species
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at
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first and
then
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we manage other environmental
problems
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.
In addition
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, we must keep
our
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any kind of
specoes
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species
safe.
Becuase
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, we need
to
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two
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types of flora to have a pretty city with more oxygen.
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, we are supposed to take care of animals
due to
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the fact that they balance the ecosystem. If flora and
fauan
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fauna
extinct
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are extinct
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, we
faced
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are faced
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with
a
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apply
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critical
porblems
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problem
problems
.
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, fighting against air pollution or global warming can not help us. In general, after analyzing and considering carefully, in my opinion, we must
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the
extiction
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extinction
of
species
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in
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apply
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the
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a
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high priority and after
that
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that,
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we manage
ohter envitonmental
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other environmental
problems
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.
Becuase
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Because
, living without any kind of
species
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is boring and not have any excitement.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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