Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
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the extiction
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extinction
are
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air pollution and global warming. In Remove the comma
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Nowadays, we face numerous environmental Use synonyms
problems
in our society. Use synonyms
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, air pollution is one of the most crucial Linking Words
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species
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the species
Moreover
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be caused
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happen
for a long time, a lot of Change the verb form
happens
species
are put in the bring of Use synonyms
extiction
. Correct your spelling
extinction
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at
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then
we manage other environmental Linking Words
problems
.
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In addition
, we must keep Linking Words
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any kind of Correct pronoun usage
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specoes
safe. Correct your spelling
species
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, we need Correct your spelling
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types of flora to have a pretty city with more oxygen. Correct your spelling
two
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, we are supposed to take care of animals Linking Words
due to
the fact that they balance the ecosystem. If flora and Linking Words
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fauna
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, we Add a missing verb
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faced
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are faced
a
critical Correct article usage
apply
porblems
. Correct your spelling
problem
problems
Thus
, fighting against air pollution or global warming can not help us.
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put
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make
extiction
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extinction
species
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in
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apply
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high priority and after Correct article usage
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that
we manage Add a comma
that,
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other environmental
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Becuase
, living without any kind of Correct your spelling
Because
species
is boring and not have any excitement.Use synonyms
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