The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The three pie charts illustrate the ways the United Kingdom, the Republic of Korea and Sweden handle their unwanted rubbish.
Overall
, all countries share the same number of methods in varying degrees; except in the UK, they use four forms as opposed to three such
as dumping it at the sea and chemicals.
Firstly
, recycling is the top method of choice in Korea at 69% and underground follows next at 22%. The least preferred choice is incineration at 9%. Although
the same methods are used in Sweden, the most preferred option at 55% is placing them underground. This
is followed by recycling at 25% and then
coming in last
is burning by fire at 20%.
In contrast
, the UK however
does not recycle at all. Instead
, their largest treatment of waste is using underground at 82%. In other words
, that is
more than four times Sweden's data. They are the only country out of the three to use chemical treatments and the sea; both share an equal value of 8% each. Finally
, their least preferred option for handling rubbish is by fire, at only 2%.Submitted by Mazam on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
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