The bar chart represents the number of travellers using three main airports in New York City from 1995 to 2000.
The bar chart represents the number of
travellers
using three
main Correct article usage
the three
airports
in New York City from 1995 to 2000.
In the supplied chart it is clearly observed that the John F. Kennedy airport
used to be the most popular Capitalize word
Airport
airport
in the
New York which lost its commonness throughout the 1990s, Correct article usage
apply
however
, the other ones held their position steadily.
The Newark airport
accounted the
least amount of people travelling, to be more precise less than 10 Change preposition
for the
million
in 1995 comparing
with Wrong verb form
compared
the
42 Correct article usage
apply
million
in 2000. As shown in the illustration by the time of 2000s airports
became more common, thus
there was a significant upsurge in the proportion of airplane travellers
and all three of provided
Correct article usage
the provided
airports
displayed a high range of passengers going up from 40 million
and reaching a peak with final 70 million
in the LaGuardia airport
.
In 1996 and 1997 airports
like John F. Kennedy and LaGuardia had more than 30 million
travellers
using their airplanes but this
proportion in the Newark airport
raised sharply from 20 to 40 million
. By contrast
, in 1998 and 1999 the LaGuardia airport
held the position of the most well-known airport
in NY collecting more than 45 million
travellers
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