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Some people say that the main environment problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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temprary
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temporary
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humanity faces
alot
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a lot
 of changes on our
planets
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, e.g, the
elemination
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elimination
 of particular types of plants or animals which
me
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 be an
empinding
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impending
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to
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 our wellbeing,
besides
, in my opinion,
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global heating is
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a more
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immence
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immense
influancer
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influence
 in our planet. in the next few
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paragraphs
 I will elaborate on
these thesis
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. Recently, we
suffer
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 from a
big
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 amount of
crisises
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crises
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 that we have to deal with.
one
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 of
that
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 is the loss of particular species of animals or trees, that change would be dangerous because it will change the balance on our earth. Variable types
is
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 demanded in order to give the
opportuenity
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opportunity
 of living to every single type. we need the strong and
also
 the weak in order to keep the variety.
On the other hand
, another, not less important problem that we are facing, is the
eclimate
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climate
chenge
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change
,
that
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 may risk all
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human
being
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beings
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 if we will not do a serious shift in our thinking.
the
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global heating may cause an increase in the water level and
all
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the
planet
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 will suffer
dramaticlly
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dramatically
, thats why some people think
this
 may be with more devastating issue.
To conclude
, both types of issues may
influance
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influence
 our planet
negativelly
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negatively
. but
the
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climate change and the
teprature
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temperature
departure
 rising
may be
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maybe
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 with more meaning since
it
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 may carry huge risks which may influence
all
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the earth directly.
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • endangered species
  • biodiversity
  • ecosystem
  • habitat
  • extinction
  • climate change
  • deforestation
  • pollution
  • global warming
  • sustainable
  • conservation
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