Some people say that the main environment problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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