You have bought a ticket for a live concert (music program) but cannot attend it. so you decided to offer the ticket a friend. write a letter to him/her and say -give details about a concert explain -why you would not be able to attend the concert -suggest how your friend will receive the ticket.

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Dear John, I am writing

this

email to offer you an opportunity to attend the Taylor Swift concert.

This

is her first tour in Toronto. The show is on 18th October 2023 at Habour Square. My ticket is for the VIP section, where you can see her from a nearer distance. I bought

this

ticket

last

month with a group of my friends. Unfortunately, because my mom is sick, I have to return to Vietnam to take care of her. I really want to go but I can’t. I think that you should replace my position. My friends, Mary and An, will sit beside you. They are very friendly. As my flight is in the next few days, I can not come to give it to you in person. I will send the ticket to your house by Canada Post. Please let me know when you receive it. I hope that you enjoy the show, and I am looking forward to hearing about your experience. Sincerely, Huyen

Submitted by huyenle1205 on Fri Oct 20 2023

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

167 words

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