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Governments should spend money to encourage the development of sport and art for school students rather than supporting professional sports and art performances for the public. Do you agree or disagree?

#governments #money #development #sport #art #school #students #sports #performances
For the time being
becoms
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 many parents prefer to stay in their homes
,
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 because they consider taking care of the family more important than working outside the
home
, as we see, most of them are women, mothers, sisters, and daughters, they are more interested than men. From my point of view, one parent must stay at
home
 to do household chores and the other must work away from the house
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it is common that the woman is the one who runs the house, including cooking and washing, and the man is the one who
work
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 out. In my opinion, every successful family is based on the cooperation of the spouses in caring for their
children
.
Therefore
, I believe that it is important for someone to stay at
home
 for many reasons,
such
 as taking care of the
children
, preparing food, and cleaning the house.
On the other hand
, we are accustomed to men being busy
out
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getting money and
speanding
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spending
 it at their
home
 we
also
 see that when parents create
this
 healthy pattern in their
children
, society will succeed and flourish in the future. It is my personal opinion that the government should encourage those who stay at
home
 and work for the benefit of their family, so that awareness, culture, and the spirit of competition spread among every family. When there is development and progress, there is behind it a conscious government that supports adults to take care of
children
.
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