The pie chart illustrates what type of transport is mostly used,while the table provides reasons for car using in Edmonton.

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in Edmonton.

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, it is evident that the vast majority of people choose cars and LRT,

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the highest percentages of car use seem to be related to commute to work and business already having hundred

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together . As can be seen from the pie chart, the majority

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to just under half of those sectors ,but taxes and buses

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for a small proportion of

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Light Rail Transit made

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of 35

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to automobiles . With regard to the table,the noticeable difference

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taking children to school and business

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going to work.The considerable differences

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and leisure activities

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the lowest figures (15%) .