Chart shows amount of people using three the biggest airports in New York since 1995 for 2000
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The chart
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of people using three Add an article
the amount
the
biggest airports in New York since 1995 for 2000
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of the
indicators
vary from year
to year
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the Add a comma
result,
indicators
both increased and decreased
LaGuardia had the highest airport traffic for 5 years, only in 1997 John.f Kennedy was in first place in
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at
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, the only times when Newark managed to take second place in
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at
indicators
were lower
John F Kennedy occupied the golden mean. The indicators
of this
airport either increased or decreased from year
to year
. Overall
indicators
for tourists were averageSubmitted by dnm.best on
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