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Chart shows amount of people using three the biggest airports in New York since 1995 for 2000

Chart shows amount of people using three the biggest airports in New York since 1995 for 2000
#amount #people #three #airports #york
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Chart
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The chart
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 shows
amount
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the amount
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 of people using three
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 biggest airports in New York since 1995 for 2000
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 vary from
year
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 and
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result
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result,
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 the
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 both increased and decreased LaGuardia had the highest airport traffic for 5 years, only in 1997 John.f Kennedy was in first place
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 the top .Newark had the lowest visitor growth
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, the only times when Newark managed to take second place
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 the top were 1998 and 1999, in other years the
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 were lower John F Kennedy occupied the golden mean. The
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 of
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 airport either increased or decreased from
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indicators
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 for tourists were average
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words indicators, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "amount" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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