You are the charge nurse on the mental health ward where Mr Ming will be discharged from and need to write a nursing referral letter to the local community mental health team.
I am writing to refer Mr Ming who has major depression and requires your continued monitoring and care. Now he is set to be discharged today.
He was admitted to our care on 5 April 2011 following deliberate
self poisoning
. He has received CBT counselling by Add a hyphen
self-poisoning
chinese
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a
speaking
transcultural mental health worker Correct your spelling
Chinese-speaking
as well as
his mother educated regarding the importance of antidepressant medications. During hospitalization, he has increased insomia
and low mood for which 30 mg Correct your spelling
insomnia
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of Mirtazipine
Mirtazipine
was administered Correct your spelling
Mirtazapine
of
his usual Change preposition
as
medication
. Currently, he made a good response to CBT.
Mr Ming is a labourer and lived
with his mother. He has Wrong verb form
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depressed
and Add a missing verb
been depressed
umemployed
since his wife got separated Correct your spelling
unemployed
due to
her affair. His mother doesn't like him taking psychiatric medication
due to
her beliefs on
herbal medicines. he has a history of hospitalization for major depression following DSP.
I would highly Change preposition
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appreciated
itChange the verb form
appreciate
,
if you could manage him through Remove the comma
apply
community
mental health team. Kindly Correct article usage
the community
made
an arrangement for CBT counselling by Wrong verb form
make
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clinician or interpreter service. Encourage him to do physical exercise and job hunting. Kindly observe his response to antidepressant Replace the word
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medication
and monitor any side effects. In addition
to that, avoid prescribing Benzo medication
as he uses these to
DSP.
Yours faithfully
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
