The table below shows the changes in participation levels in various sports in the USA between 2010 and 2014 for people aged between 18 and 34.

The table below shows the changes in participation levels in various sports in the USA between 2010 and 2014 for people aged between 18 and 34.
The table below shows the number of people involved in different sports in the USA in the years 2010 and 2014. In
this
set of data group of 18-34 years old citizens is considered.
Overall
, every sport
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witnessed significant changes with the exception of weightlifting. The largest positive change in popularity was observed in yoga and running with each sport gaining 3 million participants. The biggest fall in involvement was experienced by swimming, particularly losing 2.5 million followers. There is a trend, which has occurred in 4 years, that team sports,
such
as basketball, baseball and softball are becoming less relevant. Contrary to that, non-team activities,
for example
hiking, yoga and running, are actually increasing their popularity levels.
However
, swimming and weightlifting are outliers of the pattern discussed above. Generally, the total involvement of the young USA population has seen a small increase from 79.3 to 80.3 million, which is a sign that America is moving towards healthiness and longevity.
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