Some people say it would be a great idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent.
A large part of society believes that
the
parenting should be taught to children in their schooling. I am Correct article usage
apply
complelety
with the above statement because after learning about being a good guardian, our youngsters may start Correct your spelling
completely
involving
in taking care of small kids Wrong verb form
involved
as well as
old people around. Apart from
this
, such
trainings
can be a great idea for developing Change the wording
training
pieces of training
nation
of mature and Correct article usage
a nation
intellegent
generations.
First of all, a person is called Correct your spelling
intelligent
as
a good parent if he or she is a patient listener, caring and responsible individual. When we include Change preposition
apply
a
training or learning Remove the article
apply
of
how to be a good father or mother Change preposition
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then
this
could surely improves
the skills, mentioned above, among its learners. Change the verb form
improve
Therefore
, well trained
students could start looking after their young family members and Add a hyphen
well-trained
the
senior citizens. Correct article usage
apply
For example
, my nephew takes care of his unwell granny and he helps family
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a family
the family
in
small household chores as well because his mother had trained him Change preposition
with
for being
a good caretaker at Change preposition
to be
his
very young age.
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Secondly
, if a kid learns about parenting in the
school Correct article usage
apply
then
it become
Change the verb form
becomes
esier
for him or Correct your spelling
easier
herto
take care of people Correct your spelling
her to
around
. Correct pronoun usage
around him
Moreover
, such
a person, with adequate knowledge about developing future citizens of a country, contributes more into
the progress of Change preposition
to
nation
than others. Admittedly, it took years to learn about becoming a better guardian for adults and Correct article usage
the nation
on the other hand
, teaching such
a
useful practices to young people could definitely help their country to grow. Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
For instance
, in Poland, there is a subject on being a good adult, which has some chapters on parenting and this
inclusion of a subject turned out to be a massive success to
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for
country
in terms of growing well-mannered youngsters and adults.
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the country
a country
To conclude
, obviously
there will be a great difference in Add a comma
obviously,
overall
growth of a region if we start teaching about Add an article
the overall
a
good parenting at Remove the article
apply
a
school level. Correct article usage
the
Consequently
, these mature, helpful and caring teenagers will help a lot in responsible
work of every household.Correct article usage
the responsible
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