Some people say it would be a great idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent.

A large part of society believes that
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parenting should be taught to children in their schooling. I am
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with the above statement because after learning about being a good guardian, our youngsters may start
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in taking care of small kids
as well as
old people around.
Apart from
this
,
such
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can be a great idea for developing
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of mature and
intellegent
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intelligent
generations. First of all, a person is called
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a good parent if he or she is a patient listener, caring and responsible individual. When we include
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training or learning
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how to be a good father or mother
then
this
could surely
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the skills, mentioned above, among its learners.
Therefore
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students could start looking after their young family members and
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senior citizens.
For example
, my nephew takes care of his unwell granny and he helps
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in
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small household chores as well because his mother had trained him
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a good caretaker at
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very young age.
Secondly
, if a kid learns about parenting in
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school
then
it
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esier
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easier
for him or
herto
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her to
take care of people
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.
Moreover
,
such
a person, with adequate knowledge about developing future citizens of a country, contributes more
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the progress of
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than others. Admittedly, it took years to learn about becoming a better guardian for adults and
on the other hand
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useful practices to young people could definitely help their country to grow.
For instance
, in Poland, there is a subject on being a good adult, which has some chapters on parenting and
this
inclusion of a subject turned out to be a massive success
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country
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in terms of growing well-mannered youngsters and adults.
To conclude
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there will be a great difference in
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growth of a region if we start teaching about
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good parenting at
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school level.
Consequently
, these mature, helpful and caring teenagers will help a lot in
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work of every household.
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