The charts below show reasons for travel and the main issues for the travelling public in the US in 2009.
The given graphs show the
traveling
reasons and the issues Change the spelling
travelling
while
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traveling
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travelling
public
in the United States of America in 2009.
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in public
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, Linking Words
according to
the graphs, the main Linking Words
traveling
reason was Correct word choice
apply
the
work and the main Correct article usage
apply
issue
of Use synonyms
traveling
was Change the spelling
travelling
price
of Add an article
the price
travel
in 2009.
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In the
first bar graph shows Change preposition
The
travel
reasons, the highest number of people Use synonyms
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travel
for work Wrong verb form
travelling
popurse
, it accounted Correct your spelling
purse
almost
the half of total Change preposition
for almost
traveler
(49%) Change the spelling
traveller
while
the lowest number of people Linking Words
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travel
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travelling
for
visit friends or relatives, which was 6%. Change preposition
to
However
, 19% of people Linking Words
travel
for personal reasons and 16% Use synonyms
travel
for shopping Use synonyms
popurse
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purse
for
the US.
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in
This
pie chart indicates six Linking Words
traveling
issues in the US, as per Change the spelling
travelling
this
chart the main Linking Words
issue
was Use synonyms
price
of Add an article
the price
travel
, 36% of travellers Use synonyms
higlighed
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highlighted
highlight
this
as Linking Words
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issue
of Add an article
an issue
the issue
tralling
. Safety concerns and aggressive drivers showed as Correct your spelling
travelling
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issue
of quite similar Add an article
an issue
the issue
persentage
of traveller, 19% and 17% respectively. Correct your spelling
percentage
On the other hand
, access to public transport and space for pedestrians indicated as problems were less than 10%.Linking Words
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