cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter, •describe what you enjoyed about the course • say how much cooking you've done since the course • suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer

Dear Sir, I hope you are doing great!

Firstly

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, I would like to thank you for the great

course

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you arranged recently, I am one

the

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students

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on

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that

course

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, I learned a lot of good cooking

skills

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in that time period and now

im

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practicing

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cooking

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in my daily life kitchen recipes. I enjoyed that

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time period a lot

instead

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of learning just cooking

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I have made some wonderful friends as well, with whom I am in touch

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now and we

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became

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the

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group of 3 good friends and now looking for a meet up.

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, I would like to suggest you

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arrange another kind of wonderful cooking

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in which we can learn some baking techniques so we can improve our baking

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too and can make cakes and bakery items at home. Looking forward

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your kind positive response in regard to

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another cooking

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. Yours sincerely, Ramisha.