the chart below shows global sale of the top five mobile phone brands between 2009 and 2013.

the chart below shows global sale of the top five mobile phone brands between 2009 and 2013.
The bar chart illustrates
difference
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the difference
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of
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global
sale
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sales
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of the top five mobile phone companies between 2009 and 2013.
Units
sold
measured
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in millions.
Overall
,
Samsung
, Apple and ZTE companies show
increase
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an increase
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in
number
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the number
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units
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sold in the entire time
period
.
However
, Nokia and LG brands show
decrease
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a decrease
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in the same time
period
.
Samsung
company shows a
gradually
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increase from the start of the
period
to 2013, and
also
shows the highest increase of five different brands. It started with roughly 230 and ended with more than 300
units
sold.
Similarly
, Apple and ZTE companies
demonstrates
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a rise, but not
so
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sighnificant
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significant
as
samsung
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does. Apple started from the lowest figure in 2009 and reached
the
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third place
at the end
of the
period
and comprised
the
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150
of
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units
sold. Regarding the ZTE,
chart
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the chart
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shows the least change of
units
in comparison with other brands from 2009 to 2013. With regard to Nokia, data shows that
company
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was the
first,
in terms of products sold, in 2009 and 2011, but was replaced after a
drammatic
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dramatic
fall from more than 400 to 220, by
Samsung
. The LG company gradually
falled
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from 2009 and 2013,
started
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starting
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with more than 100 and
ended
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ending
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up with roughly 70.
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