Some people believe that the expansion of tourism is ruining the culture of a country, but others consider that tourism is the only way of protecting a culture. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The benefits of
tourism
is
renowned all over the world. There are conflicting Change the verb form
are
views
on the influence of tourism
in
the cultures of each Change preposition
on
country
; some community thinks that tourism
is disrupting the culture
of a country
; whereas
, some think of it as the only way to preserve the culture
. This
essay will discuss both ways of thinking,
and will provide my personal opinion towards the influences of Remove the comma
apply
tourism
to
a community's Change preposition
on
cultures
.
Fix the agreement mistake
culture
First,
tourist can influence a country
's way of thinking, which can distort their personal beliefs. For example
, if a local witness
a different Fix the agreement mistake
witnesses
behavior
from the travellers, they tend to adjust their actions to match the visitor's desires. Change the spelling
behaviour
Moreover
, in some circumstances, the community need to adjust their trademarks, so that they can encourage more people to visit them. Therefore
, citizens may become used
to the Rephrase
so used
tourism
strategies that they tend to forget about their own identity.
On the other hand
, tourism
can be the only option to maintain a country
's tradition. If visitors are interested in learning a specific country
's history, it will be essential for authorities to keep the local cultures. For instance
, many people travel to Japan, as they wanted
to wear Wrong verb form
want
the
traditional Japanese costumes. Correct article usage
apply
Furthermore
, travellers are impressed by roots
of the Japanese traditions. Correct article usage
the roots
Thus
, the government believe that it is vital to maintain a country
's tradition and history.
To conclude
, there are opposing views
on effects
of Correct article usage
the effects
tourism
's popularity to
a Change preposition
on
country
's culture
. In my opinion, both views
are beneficial to maintain the culture
of a country
. Both views
have strong points in each ways
.Change to a singular noun
way
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