The map below describes changes to a park in 1980 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below describes changes to a park in 1980 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given pictures compare the layout of a
park
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. It is manifest a transformation from the past to the current situation.
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, the
park
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has been improved and it is accessible to the public since there is no wall surrounding the
park
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. In the past time, in 1980, towards the south and northwest were two entrance gates, which
also
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reminded the one and only road connected to each other. The
park
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was mostly flowers in the south part
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the northeast was full of trees. To the west, close to the entrance was a small pond with benches around it. Turning to the present time, the road has been extended in the
park
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to connect all the areas. It is almost in a four-junction model.
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the pond stays the same with only adding one bench, the area close to it is now full of bush. The flowers on the southeast were cut down and have been converted into a playground. The area of trees is decreased in size with the addition of barbeque spots.
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