You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter • describe what you enjoyed about the course • say how much cooking you’ve done since the course • suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing with reference to your letter inquiring about my knowledge which I have studied in
outstanding
course which has been provided by your school.
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Firstly
, I would like to accurately commend your staff as well as
their dedication during full training. The process of learning new technologies of
cooking has been a challenging task for me. Change preposition
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, I have overcome all difficulties in order to accomplish my goals with support from your employees who have profound knowledge. Further
, I was welcomed warmly at the beginning of my study hence
amazing emotions have been received by me.
Additionally
, if you are interested in the experience which I have gained subsequently
, I would like to inform you that some funds, as well as
organisations, have started to invite me to banquets as person
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Moreover
, I had
demonstrated my skills a multitude of times since I upgraded my expertise in the field of Wrong verb form
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Lastly
, I wonder about an opportunity to improve my skills in catching a
fish because currently, I have already had painful experiences. If you come to a decision to realize Correct article usage
apply
such
a course, I will delighted to enroll in it.
I look forward to hearing from you!
Yours faithfully,
Ignat BernSubmitted by yauhen.ilyushenka on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite