The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in Netherland between 2001 and 2006. Describe the information in the table and make comparisons where appropriate. Write at least 150 words.

The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in Netherland between 2001 and 2006. Describe the information in the table and make comparisons where appropriate. Write at least 150 words.
the
table
shows the average
distance
changes in
Netherland
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Netherlands
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traveling
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travelling
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modes, and it is
analysis
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an analysis
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specific
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of specific
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time which is between 2001 and 2006.
According to
what is shown, It is clear as we can see that there
is
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are
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different change rates,
car
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the car
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for instance
has the biggest average
distance
in both times, in 2001 it was 3199 and it
got
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apply
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increased to
become
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4806 in 2006, and when we talk about the second mode of most using, the
table
shows that train average was 239 in 2001, and it is become 366 in 2006.
As
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From
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the information given
by
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in
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this
table
, we can see that not all of the modes had increased, and that because the local bus average
distance
was decreasing with the time running, and the bicycle was decreasing too.
To sum up
, we could say that most of the modes
table
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the table
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shows were having increase in it is average
distance
, except local
bus
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buses
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and
bicycle
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bicycles
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words table, distance with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.

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