Aircraft have been increasingly used to transport fruit and vegetables to some countries where such plants hardly grow or out of season. Some people consider it is a good trend but some oppose it. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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popularity significantly

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in order to deliver numerous nation’s

vegetable

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and fruit to countries

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difficult

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condition

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for farming.

While

the majority of people

suppose

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this

idea, others believe that it is unnecessary.

This

essay will shed light on core factors and outline the reason why the writer agrees with the former view.

To begin

with,

airline

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itself required tons of fuel from coal, gas and

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from oil.

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these

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sort of energy, there would be a shortage in resources of each nation which may lead to

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decrease in

pace

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of development

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. By burning fuels, planes could release a large amount of greenhouse gases and might be harmful to the environment and

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life.

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, California

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more than twenty-seven percent of gas

emission

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in 2012 which could be considered as a warning for the aircraft business.

Therefore

, aircraft may not always be the best option. There are,

however

, several beneficial benefits from using air transport. Despite bad disadvantages in activating planes,

this

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machines have incredible speed which can be used to bring products to overseas continents. For that reason, many countries which deal with famine or drought will be able to go on innovating their own goods. As a premiere example,

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State can be a nation which is developed and have the likelihood to provide fruit

also

vegetables for underprivileged nations. In my view, transportation

such

as planes will be the best

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for many nations. Because it can help bad nations deal with weather

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and

improving

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facilities with

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rate of grown

product

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.

For example

, Canada will invest a little of their money in air transport so as to make the whole world

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.

To sum up

, air business can bring many benefits

also

disadvantages for

environment

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and

human’s

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life. In my opinion,

this

can be considered as a good method for many

developing-countries

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developing countries

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