It is believed that many
people
from around the world
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seemingly
caringWrong verb form
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much about staying fit at all. As many
hard workingAdd a hyphen
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man and woman have drained their own
energy
from
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as well as
their
work
times have taken over all their daily
life
. In order to combat
this
incident so that
people
can live a healthier
life
, helping hands from employers and skills to balance out one's
life
are much needed.
Firstly
, It
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to deny that the amount of
worksFix the agreement mistake
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they have to endure in their workplaces is astronomically massive, even though it is a 9 to 5
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which is 8 hours on average.
For example
, as a mechanical engineer myself, throughout my day all of my
energy
has
spentAdd a missing verb
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dried for my 9 to 5 jobs.
Although
most of the
time
it didn't need any labor
but Correct word choice
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the tasks were always demanding
hence
iChange the capitalization
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could only imagine myself getting into bed after my day in
officeCorrect article usage
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.
Additionally
, not only
work
time
is Unnecessary verb
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the only factor, housework,
familyCorrect word choice
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,... are
also
becoming parts
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your daily
life
's pie chart.
Hence
it is difficult for anyone to focus on their health.
For that reason, after stumbled the roots of the problems, drastic measures needed to be
conductedVerb problem
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. Employers need to reconsider
to shortenChange the verb form
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their
time
of Change preposition
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worksFix the agreement mistake
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or
breakWrong verb form
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down
one'sChange noun form
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workloads, which will help their employees have enough
energy
to
work
out or even spare
time
with their family as well.
However
, sometimes, it is not their
companies atChange noun form
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fault as there are many
of Change preposition
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incidents where
people
procrastinate which leads to loads amount of unresolved
worksFix the agreement mistake
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.
Subsequently
, these types of
people
need to improve to overcome their laziness
as well as
adopt
time
management
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skillFix the agreement mistake
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.
In a nutshell,
although
health is meant to be taken seriously, many
people
don't have enough
time
or
energy
to do so.
Hence
, their workplaces should shorten their
employeesChange noun form
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time
of Change preposition
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worksFix the agreement mistake
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and they
also
need to
work
on their
time
management in order not to be overwhelmed
