It is believed that many
from around the world
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seemingly
caringWrong verb form
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much about staying fit at all. As many
hard workingAdd a hyphen
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man and woman have drained their own
from
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their
times have taken over all their daily
. In order to combat
incident so that
can live a healthier
, helping hands from employers and skills to balance out one's
are much needed.
, It
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to deny that the amount of
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they have to endure in their workplaces is astronomically massive, even though it is a 9 to 5
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which is 8 hours on average.
, as a mechanical engineer myself, throughout my day all of my
has
spentAdd a missing verb
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dried for my 9 to 5 jobs.
most of the
it didn't need any labor
but Correct word choice
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the tasks were always demanding
iChange the capitalization
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could only imagine myself getting into bed after my day in
officeCorrect article usage
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.
, not only
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the only factor, housework,
familyCorrect word choice
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,... are
becoming parts
inChange preposition
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your daily
's pie chart.
it is difficult for anyone to focus on their health.
For that reason, after stumbled the roots of the problems, drastic measures needed to be
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. Employers need to reconsider
to shortenChange the verb form
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their
of Change preposition
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worksFix the agreement mistake
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or
breakWrong verb form
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down
one'sChange noun form
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workloads, which will help their employees have enough
to
out or even spare
with their family as well.
, sometimes, it is not their
companies atChange noun form
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fault as there are many
of Change preposition
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incidents where
procrastinate which leads to loads amount of unresolved
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.
, these types of
need to improve to overcome their laziness
adopt
management
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skillFix the agreement mistake
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.
In a nutshell,
health is meant to be taken seriously, many
don't have enough
or
to do so.
, their workplaces should shorten their
employeesChange noun form
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of Change preposition
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worksFix the agreement mistake
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and they
need to
on their
management in order not to be overwhelmed