Aircrafts have been increasingly used to transport fruit and vegetables to some countries where such plants hardly grow or out of season. Some people consider it a good idea, some are not. Discuss both views and your opinion

Lately, planes have been widely utilised to
delivery
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fruit and
vegetables
to
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underprivileged nations. Some individuals hold the belief that importing agricultural cargo by the airway is beneficial,
while
others assume that it is not.
This
essay attempts to discuss both views and provide my perspective which is transporting agricultural goods by
aircrafts
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is more advantageous. On the one hand, the delivery service of
fruits
and
vegetables
by
airline
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the airline
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have
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some drawbacks, namely the negative influence on
environment
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the environment
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.
According to
a recent
artical
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article
, a commercial plane releases hundreds
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kilogram
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kilograms
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of carbon dioxide, which is a prime pollutant, to the atmosphere per 100
kilometers
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. It must be
regconised
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recognised
recognized
that during
a
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day, there is not only one flight, but
also
thousands of flights, including domestic and international ones.
As a result
, nearly tonnes of emissions are emitted every single day to the environment which
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in many adverse impacts.
On the other hand
,
i
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strongly believe that using planes to
delivery
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deliver
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fruits
and
vegetable
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vegetables
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is more beneficial
due to
the products’ quality maintenance.
This
is because
,
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the average cruising airspeed is approximately 800
kilometers
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kilometres
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per hour. For that reason, using
airplanes
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aeroplanes
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for products transport from a country, which is far thousands of
kilometers
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kilometres
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apart
to
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from
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each
others
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other
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can optimise a considerable amount of time in hermetic
condition
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conditions
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. If agriculture products are contained in
the
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cargo containers for
the
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excessive time,
it
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can absolutely be rotten.
Therefore
, transporting them by aircraft can reduce
maximally
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the time in harsh
condition
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conditions
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which leads to
the
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better quality of the
fruits
and
vegetables
. In conclusion, despite the disadvantageous of air
freightm
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freight
,
such
as habitat destruction,
i
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I
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still believe that transporting
fruits
and
vegetables
by
aircrafts
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aircraft
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is beneficial attributed to the
time-efficiency
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time efficiency
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.
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