More and more wild animals are on the verge extinction and others are on the endangered list. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem?
Animals
are an integral part of Correct article usage
the enviromental
enviromental
.Nowadays ,the majority number of wild Correct your spelling
environment
animals
are on the way of
extinction, and some of them are on the endangered list. Change preposition
to
This
essay will discuss the main problems associated with disappearance
Correct article usage
the disappearance
animals
and propose some possible solutions to avoid them.
One of the main causes of the problem is illegal hunting.Many Change preposition
of animals
people
hunt animals
for their skin and some hound as a hobby.As a result
, relatives of wild animals
will disappear.For.example,many tigers are killed by people
for weaving coat
.The solution is that the government must pass Fix the agreement mistake
coats
the
law in the parliament against illegal hunting.In Correct article usage
a
this
way,we maybe
save endangered Correct your spelling
may
animals
.
Another reason for the extinction of many creatures is deforestation which is done to facilitate the expansion and development of urban areas.Due to
the fact that people
is
cutting down the forests .Wild Change the verb form
are
animals
lode
their natural habitat and Correct your spelling
lose
animals
put their life's
at risk. Change noun form
lives
That is
to say
homeless Add a comma
say,
animals
go to
among Change preposition
apply
people
for finding
cats.That's Change preposition
to find
way
Correct your spelling
why
people
end the lives of animals
to avoid lunge.To tackle this
problem, government
must ban Add an article
the government
the
deforestation and Correct article usage
apply
people
need use
Fix the infinitive
to use
for
Correct pronoun usage
it for
growth
of cities.Add an article
the growth
Such
as inor
.Inor is strong ,in preference to wood.
In conclusion, Correct your spelling
minor
illegally
hunting and the removal of all trees from Change the word
illegal
a large areas
have become serious problems. My view is that the main responsibility for solving the problem lies with the government.Correct the article-noun agreement
large areas
a large area
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