Some people argue that immigrants should adopt the local culture when immigrating to a new country. An alternative view is that they can adapt to a new environment by establishing a minority community. Discuss these two views and give your opinion.
Whether
immigrants
should adopt the local culture has emerged as Use synonyms
one
of the most debated topics in recent decades. Some people believe they should change to keep up with a new country, Use synonyms
while
others believe keeping their own unique characteristics is the best way. In Linking Words
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essay, I will discuss both views and support the latter Linking Words
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.
On the Use synonyms
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hand, advocates of adopting the new heritage argue that the new culture is too different from the old Use synonyms
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. It is because the newcomer is a minority community in a new country. Keeping their own way of living means that they cannot blend in with local citizens. Use synonyms
Accordingly
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may feel lonely and separated. Linking Words
For example
, an Indian worker who is eating by hand frequently may feel disconnected if they eat that way at an American office.
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On the other hand
, some people argue that newcomers can establish a minority community to make things easier. It is because a group of Linking Words
immigrants
can help each other and give advice. In many cases, ethnic groups play an important role in guidance and orientation. Use synonyms
For instance
, the Vietnamese community in my neighbourhood has been helping thousands of newcomers to find jobs or to file taxes. In many cases, Linking Words
immigrants
are not good at foreign languages. Use synonyms
Thus
, they need help with daily life, school, or law cases.
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To conclude
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immigrating to a new life requires lots of changes. Still, I believe that it should be a mixture of old and new cultures. Linking Words
Immigrants
can keep their own unique traits Use synonyms
while
adjusting to a totally different life.Linking Words
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task achievement
Consider deepening the analysis of each view to provide a more comprehensive discussion.
coherence cohesion
Pay attention to ensuring smooth, logical progression between ideas to enhance cohesion.
task achievement
The essay presents a balanced discussion of both views and provides a clear opinion.
coherence cohesion
The introduction and conclusion are effective and relevant to the topic.