The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart indicates the changes in the
numbers
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number
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of visitors travelling to a particular Caribbean
island
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from 2010 to 2017.
According to
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the
graph
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graph,
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it is obvious that the total
number
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of tourists visiting that
island
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experienced a dramatic increase, and there were different levels of growth
on
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in
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the
number
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of tourists staying on cruise ships or on
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island
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the island
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. In 2010, there were merely 1
million
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visitors
of
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to
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the
island
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in total.
However
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, the figure
then
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skyrocketed, climbing to 2
million
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in 2013 and reaching 3.5
million
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in 2017. A significant increase in the
number
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of visitors choosing to stay on cruise
ship
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ships
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could
also
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be seen. The figure rose from about 0.25
million
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in 2010 to 0.5
million
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in 2011. After a small decline to about 0.3
million
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in 2012, the
number
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kept growing and reached 1.5
million
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in 2017.
In contrast
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, the increase
of
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in
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the
number
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of tourists staying on
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island
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the island
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was relatively small. The figure stayed the same in 2011 as in 2010, and slightly decreased to about 1.25
million
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in 2016, after reaching 1.5
million
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in 2016. In 2017 the
number
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was back to the same level as in 2015, which was 1.5
million
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words island, number, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "numbers of" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fluctuate
  • Trend
  • Peak
  • Decline
  • Increase
  • Decrease
  • Stable
  • Dramatic rise
  • Gradual decline
  • Visitor numbers
  • Period
  • Data points
  • Rapid growth
  • Comparison
  • Tourism trends
  • Economic factors
  • Natural disasters
  • Marketing promotions
  • Seasonal variations
  • Impact
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