The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual ’ income in 2007, 2011 and 2015.
The bar chart illustrates the annual
incomes
of households
in the US in years
2007, 2011 and 2015. Annual Correct article usage
the years
incomes
categorized
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are categorized
in
5 different Change preposition
into
section
.
Most Change to a plural noun
sections
of
income groups remained steady throughout the period except Change preposition
apply
number
of lower groups and people with higher income showed Change the article
a number
the number
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a sharply
sharply
increase.
In 2007, nearly 30 Change the word
sharp
million
of
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apply
households
have
more than $100,000 income and Wrong verb form
had
this
decreased to around 25 million
of
people before Change preposition
apply
showed
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showing
increase
in 2015 to more than 32 Add an article
an increase
million
of
people. Change preposition
apply
This
was the biggest rose
in the all period. Replace the word
rise
Similarly
, households
who have total earnings less
than $25.000 saw Change preposition
of less
same
pattern, it started with exactly 25 Change the article
the same
million
of family in 2007, than
reached Correct your spelling
then
to
under 30 Change preposition
apply
million
after 5 years and lost around 2 million
households
in 2015.
Nearly 65 million
houses have incomes
between $25.000 to 100.000$ and this
numbers remain almost Change the determiner
these
same
in three years. Correct article usage
the same
However
, houseös with incomes
between $25.000 - $49.000 expreinced
more than 3 Correct your spelling
experienced
million
increases in termm
of Correct your spelling
terms
term
households
numbers from 2007 to 2011.Change the noun form
household
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Vocabulary: Replace the words incomes, households, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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