The table below gives information about the problems faced by children in two primary schools in 2005 and 2015.

The table below gives information about the problems faced by children in two primary schools in 2005 and 2015.
The table illustrates statistics concerning the proportion of children exposed to various issues during their education in two primary schools in two distinct years.
Overall
, a decrease in the
percentage
of
students
with educational issues over time notwithstanding,
students
experienced more problems in
School
A rather than in
School
B
.   In 2005, a higher
percentage
of
students
struggled with different problems in
school
A, where concentration in lessons and following instructions served as the main problem areas, representing 40 per
cent
and 42 per
cent
respectively.
On the other hand
, verbal expression of ideas (with 14 per
cent
) and concentration in lessons (with 15 per
cent
) in
school
B
played a more vital role in challenging children during schooling.   In 2015,
while
the
percentage
of
students
in almost all problem fields remained approximately unchanged in
School
B
, the proportion in
School
A fell dramatically, especially in the primary problem areas.
This
means that the
percentage
of
students
in
school
A having problems with concentrating in lessons and following instructions, with Level  falling by half to 18 per
cent
in 2015.
However
, in
school
B
, two primary reasons for educational setbacks did not alter, remaining at 15 per
cent
in 2015.
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