The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.
The flow diagram illustrates the stages involved in the process of recycling bottles made of rubbers.
Overall
, there are 9 sequential stages for plastic recycling which begins with gathering them in rubbish cans and ending with changing raw material into final products.
Firstly
, when the garbage is collected in the garbage can, it is transported to the recycling centre by special lorries. Then
they are sorted according to
size and color to be ready for the next step which is compressing. In this
stage, they are transformed into blocks. Following
this
stage, the blocks undergo the crushing and the washing phase which is done by special equipment. Subsequently
, by using particular machinery, plastic pellets are manufactured and then
undergo the heating phase to form raw materials. Finally
, raw material is utilized to produce the end products like containers or clothes and even the stationery. Lastly
, the goods are ready for distribution in the market and consumptionSubmitted by golriiz23 on
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