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The Graph shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kindom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.

The Graph shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kindom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.
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The line graph displays the dislodgement of carbon dioxide per individual from 1967 to 2007 in
United
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 Kingdom,
Sweden
,Italy and Portugal.The unit is measured in metric tonnes.
Overall
, it is evident that there was an upward trend in
UK
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 and
Sweden
while
 a downward slope was observed in the remaining countries over the years.
To begin
 with, In 1967,the figures stood at 11 in
UK
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 and
was
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 the highest when compared to other places and Portugal was the least at 1 hitting the bottom of the graph.
Furthermore
, There was a
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 pattern between
United
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 Kingdom and
Sweden
 as they witnessed a dramatic fall to 9 and 5 respectively by 2007.
On the contrary
, in
portugal
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 and Italy,their initial rate rose rapidly from 5 and 1 respectively over the years,
although
, there was an intersection in the value of Italy and
Sweden
 at 7 from 1987 to 1997,
while
 that of
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 and Portugal clashed at 5 being the least
at the end
 of the period.
However
, in 2007, The highest emissions were in Italy and
Sweden
, with
UK
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 being the highest
amongst
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 the four nations.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sweden, uk with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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