the chart below shows the changes in three different areas of cime in manchester city center from 2003-2012.

the chart below shows the changes in three different areas of cime in manchester city center from 2003-2012.
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The line chart displays the difference in rates of
Burglary
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,Car theft and
Robbery
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in Manchester City centre between 2003 and 2012.
Overall
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,it is evident that there were
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fluctuations
over the years with car theft with the highest value and
Robbery
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being the least.
To begin
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with, In 2003,
Burglary
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was the highest amongst others
while
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robbery
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hit the through of the graph.The figure for
Burglary
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increased rapidly to about 3,700 at the peak of the graph before witnessing a plunge to 1,100 in 2008
following
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this
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, were variations and
then
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, it stood at 1,400 by 2012.
Also
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, Car theft was at 2,300 at the beginning. Afterwards,there was a sharp fall to 2,000 and it made an intersection with the value of
Burglary
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at 2,100 from 2006 to 2007 before it rose to 2,700 and was the highest amongst others.
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,
Robbery
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was 500 in 2006,
this
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was followed by a slight surge to 900 in 2007.Before, it fell slightly and remained constant till 2009 and was at 600, the bottom
at the end
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of the period.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words burglary, robbery with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend
  • significant
  • fluctuating
  • anomalies
  • external factors
  • economic fluctuation
  • law enforcement strategies
  • societal changes
  • speculation
  • impact
  • data collection
  • reliability
  • interpretation
  • measures
  • strategies
  • broader implications
  • development
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