Question: Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plant and animals. Other say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Environmental

issues

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are emerging. A part of society argues that these

issues

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are caused by the decreasing of particular species of

plants

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and animals,

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the other

believe

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that there

more

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are more

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important environmental problems that

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more harm. Significant decreases

of

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in

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certain species will cause food chain instability and difficulty in managing disasters. An example

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the former is that, when there is a downfall of insects within an ecosystem, it will affect the food production of

plants

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since their reproduction process

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helped by insects.

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, there will be

insufficient

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food supply for the

herbivore

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and

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eventually

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the

carnivore

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.

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, regarding the latter, several

plants

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often contribute through their roots in maintaining the structure of land

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and prevent us from experiencing landslides. Despite the problem caused by decreasing habitat diversity, environmental

issues

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as industrial waste and pollution

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become major contributors.

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, in Indonesia, the owner of textile industries are often disobeying the rules of

fabric-coloring

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sewage standards.

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, the land soils are contaminated by heavy metals that were used as

coloring

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substances.

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, the pollution

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are often caused by coal-based power

plant

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plants

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.

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, in Indonesia, approximately 80% of its electricity

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supplied by coal-based energy, which means there are a massive number of ashes that are released

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the air.

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, I agree that the other source of the environmental problems

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as industries and power

plants

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are the major contributors since they engage in a big production scale.