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People aim to achieve a balance between their work and lives, but few people achieve it. what are the causes of this problem? How to overcome it?

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Nowadays,
people
 are struggling with a grand issue which is the need for balance between their
lives
 and occupations. In my point of view, making a work-life balance not only increases the chances of success, but
it
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can
also
 help
people
 manage their
lives
 in a better way,
such
 as
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 their emotions and understanding how to behave when they are stressed. In
this
 essay, I am going to discuss some solutions
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this
 problem. First of all, when
people
 cannot afford their basic needs, it forces them to look for a second job to increase their income enough to have a more comfortable life.
On the other hand
,
this
 can cause them stress and even depression, so they can no longer continue to work and enjoy their
lives
. For
this
 problem,
people
 can learn how to manage their budget and time by having a schedule. They can make a table of what they spent on it and try to use the money for more important things.
Secondly
, some
people
 may have a work addiction that makes them work 24 hours a day
,
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 as if they are married to their job.
However
, these
people
 should know that sometimes they should take life easy and try to spend time with others. Hanging out with friends and family can not only be self-care, but it
also
 keeps
people
 motivated and able to perform their tasks better.
To conclude
, having a work-life balance is a healthy way to live. In my opinion, parents should teach their children how to create harmony between their plans in their
lives
,
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 and learn that
people
 do not achieve their goals overnight
moreover
 having order and harmony can be a great help to achieve their goals.
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