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The Diagram Below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The Diagram Below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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The process diagram illustrates the stages of preparing used
plastic
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 containers for reuse as new
plastic
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.
Overall
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, it can be seen the whole operation consists of nine steps. With manual and machine-operated system. Process continuously rotates from the used
plastic
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 bottles to the new
plastic
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 productions. In the beginning the users of
plastic
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 containers
such
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 as bags, and bottles collected to the relevant bin.
Then
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 a truck of domestic refuse was taken to the recycling Centre.
Thereafter
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, it was divided into
plastic
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 and non-
plastic
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 items. In the fourth stage make a cube by compressing selected
plastic
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 items.
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 the cube is sent to the crushing machine equipped with two large metal wheels with sharp ends which allows for crushing and making small particles and passes to the water tank to clean up at the fifth stage.
Thus
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 washed
plastic
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 particles are sent to the machine consisting of the fan which makes pallets.
Then
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 heat and make row material in the seventh stage;
consequently
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,
plastic
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 row material is stored in eight steps.
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, row material supply to the manufacturers of
plastic
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 bottles, Yarn, Bags and textiles by using recycled
plastic
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "thus".
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words plastic with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • recycling process
  • collection stage
  • transported
  • recycling facility
  • sorted
  • type and quality
  • recyclable plastics
  • contaminants
  • cleaned
  • shredded
  • plastic flakes
  • melted down
  • pellets
  • beads
  • raw material
  • manufacture
  • new products
  • distribution
  • completing the recycling loop
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