Aircraft have been increasingly used to transport fruits and vegetables to some countries where such plants hardly grow or are out of season some people consider it a good idea, but some people oppose it.

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risen in the transmission of
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fruits and vegetables industry, and especially used to deliver to areas lacking
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these products.
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not solely for
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travelling but
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to suffer from famine or
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, China and Russia have
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airlines only for exchanging and exporting products.
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aircraft
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to activate the engines.
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regardless of its favourable
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at the
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in California reveals that 27% of the carbon dioxide released into the atmosphere, affecting the air quality of numerous countries
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are responsible for .
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of toxic
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good transportation, does not mean that it should be increased rise.
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environmental
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environmental
problems in the next decade leading to much more significant consequences

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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