You are having a party and want to invite your friend from a different city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Describe why you are having the party Give directions on how to get to the venue Suggest how you can accommodate him/her

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Dear Glenn, I hope you are in sound health and doing well. I couldn't be happier to let you know that after many years of intense wait,

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I have been able to buy a home and I ask you to join me in my happiness because I have arranged a housewarming party for the coming Sunday. I came to that you have taken off from your work for self-reflection and you are available on the destined day. My joy will be doubled having you around.

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,my apartment is in close vicinity to the airport and just a fifteen-minute drive from it and a single taxi would suffice.

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,our classmates Ritesh and Himanshu would grace the occasion.

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, a community hall has been booked for the stay of all the kiths and kins.Neither you will have any trouble travelling nor staying. In fact, there will only be fun and enjoyment. I can't wait to meet you. See you soon. Yours truly Ankita.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

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161 words

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It is suggested that some countries give money to poorer countries rather than financial aid.

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