Academic IELTS Writing task 1 Sample 4 – The bar chart below shows the results of a survey and shows factors affecting work performance
The givens bar chart illustrates the comparison of the factors affecting work performance.
Overall
, team spirit and work environment there is stability. While
other factors fluctuate.
Firstly
, team spirit and work environment remain stable. Besides
chance
for personal development in 18-30 made up 80 per cent and 45-60 more than 40 per cent. The relaxed working environment in the 18-30 ratio was 70% and 45-60 was 30%. Add an article
the chance
Furthermore
, in Competent Boss there was no significant difference between 18-30 and 45-60. Job security, 18-30 there is quite a big difference, in 18-30 accounts 40 and 45-60 was 20 per cent.
Respect from colleagues in 18-30 was 40 Meanwhile, in 45-60, there are 50%. On the other hand
, Promotion prospects in 18-30 Occupy a very large percentage up to 80 and 45-60 only accounts for 45%. Next,
Job Satisfaction and Money only a 5% differenceSubmitted by quynhtranhbh on
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Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 3 times.
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