Academic IELTS Sample 4 – The bar chart below shows the results of a survey and shows factors affecting work performance

The givens bar chart illustrates the comparison of the factors affecting work performance.

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, team spirit and work environment there is stability.

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other factors fluctuate.

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, team spirit and work environment remain stable.

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chance

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for personal development in 18-30 made up 80 per cent and 45-60 more than 40 per cent. The relaxed working environment in the 18-30 ratio was 70% and 45-60 was 30%.

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, in Competent Boss there was no significant difference between 18-30 and 45-60. Job security, 18-30 there is quite a big difference, in 18-30 accounts 40 and 45-60 was 20 per cent. Respect from colleagues in 18-30 was 40 Meanwhile, in 45-60, there are 50%.

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, Promotion prospects in 18-30 Occupy a very large percentage up to 80 and 45-60 only accounts for 45%.

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Job Satisfaction and Money only a 5% difference