The chart below gives information about birth and death rates in Switzerland from 1970 to 2020 according to UN statistics. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph gives an overview of death and birth proportions in Switzerland between the period of 1970 to 2020 given by UN statistics.
Overall
, the ratio of birth
Fix the agreement mistake
births
is
Verb problem
has
rising
constantly in the Wrong verb form
risen
six
decades. The death rate was the same before 2000, Correct word choice
last six
however
, it turned over after 1990 to continued dipping in the last
decades.
With respect to births, the number of births was at the minimum rate in 1970 similarly
to in 1980 Change the word
similar
to
record Fix the infinitive
apply
approximately
1.25 million Change preposition
of approximately
newborn
at that time. From 1990 to 2000 there was a notable increase related to child-birth at the rate of about 1 million more in 2000. The constant rise of new-borns continued to arriveChange to a plural noun
newborns
a
higher percentage in 2020 recorded Change preposition
at a
3.25
million at that time.
Regarding deaths, in the thirty years from 1970 to 1990 the dying proportions rose to reach a peak in 1990. From Change preposition
at 3.25
then
the numbers started reducing in the following thirty years to achieve the lowest number of deaths in 2020.Submitted by moaznashy123 on
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