49.Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for commiting it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both these views and give your opinion

Some say that a stable punishment should be used for every type of violation,

while

others would argue that each situation and reason why someone

perform

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a

crime

should be considered.

This

essay would argue that

although

people

may have difficulties, is not a reason for breaking the

laws

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law

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. On the one hand, individuals need to face different problems during

all

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their

life

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lives

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, and the first thing that

it came

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to their mind for solving the problem, can be by

commiting

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committing

crimes.

This

is because

problem

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problems

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normally are related to

money

, so

people

who do not have

money

are

enable

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to buy food or allow their children to go to school, so all their

family

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do not have

future

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.

Also

, for going to the hospital and healing diseases,

money

is needed,

then

, some

people

can’t find another way to get out

from

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their situation and the easiest and quickest way is by stealing.

For example

, around 30% of robbery

cases

are

due to

the insufficient amount of

money

they have for the treatment that they need to pay, and these

people

thought that stealing was the faster way to get

the

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enough

money

.

However

, I believe that there are other better ways to solve the problem,

such

as asking friends and other family members.

On the other hand

, depending on the

crime

commited

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committed

people

should have the same punishment.

This

will decrease the

crime

cases

, since they may think

that is

not profitable to carry out a

crime

and have more serious consequences than they think. If all

cases

are studied and analysed, some individuals may lie and play

self pity

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, trying to reduce the penalization.

For example

, it is said that when

people

kill someone, these criminals should be put to death, but relatives of children under 18 will say that even though they have killed someone they are kids, so cannot be punished. And as children know that they do not need to take legal responsibilities, they are not worried. I believe

this

point of view is preferable because

cases

of

crime

will significantly decline. In conclusion,

although

everybody has their own issues,

this

is not the reason why

people

can carry out crimes, and

this

is why, in my opinion, is better to establish

especified

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specified

punishment for each

crime

.