The table below gives information about consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.
The table illustrates the percentage of spending on three
type
of items by consumers of five European Change to a plural noun
types
countries
in the year 2002. Use synonyms
Overall
, all five Linking Words
countries
spent more on food, drinks and tobacco. Use synonyms
This
was three times more than the next most popular item which Linking Words
iwas
clothing and footwear. All Correct your spelling
was
countries
spent the least on leisure and education.
In terms of the sales Use synonyms
in
food, drinks and tobacco, Change preposition
of
Turkey
had the highest spending (32.14%). Use synonyms
Moreover
, Ireland was Linking Words
also
high in numbers but was 4% less. The three remaining Linking Words
countries
ranged between 15% to 18%, it was almost half less than what Use synonyms
Turkey
had achieved.
The next item was clothing and footwear, Italy ranged at 9% being the top in Use synonyms
this
item. Linking Words
On the other hand
, Sweden, Ireland, Spain and Linking Words
Turkey
were almost similar Use synonyms
on
percentages ranging Change preposition
in
at
6% more or slightly less.
Change preposition
from
Finally
, all Linking Words
countries
paid less Use synonyms
on
leisure and education, 4.35% being the highest was Change preposition
for
Turkey
. The Use synonyms
least
was Spain reported only 1.98% which was not far from the amount of Ireland, Italy and Sweden.Correct word choice
lowest
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