You have just started a course in a college which has no sports facilities of its own. Write a letter to the manager of the nearest private sports club. In your letter •introduce yourself • say why you are interested in this sports club • ask some questions about the club e.g. facilities, members, costs
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to inquire about the Snap Fitness
sports
club
.
I am a first year
student at Western College. I have just discovered that my college does not provide any Add a hyphen
first-year
sports
facilities as of yet. However
, I found Snap Fitness to be the nearest sports
club
and would like to request more information about it.
Firstly
, I wonder if you could possibly give me a small overview of the available facilities. It would be interesting to know whether the club
offers some sports
classes and personal training sessions.
Secondly
, I would be interested to know how big the gym area is and what types of equipment are available.
Lastly
, I wonder what kind of membership the club
offers. Do you have monthly or weekly based tickets available or do I need to sign up for a longer period?
I would appreciate it if you could send the details to my email.
I look forward to hearing from you!
Yours faithfully,
Jack SmithSubmitted by ina1_95 on
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task response
Make sure to include all the required information in your letter.
coherence cohesion
Use more linking words and phrases to improve the flow of your ideas.
lexical resource
Expand your range of vocabulary by using more varied and precise words.
grammatical range
Pay attention to sentence structures and grammar to avoid errors.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.