You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below shows global sales of the top five mobile phone brands between 2009 and 2013. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The chart below shows global sales of the top five mobile phone brands between 2009 and 2013.

Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words
The given bar graph delineates the information related to the sales of the five most popular cell phone companies that are Samsung, Apple,
Nokia
, LG and ZTE between the period of 2009 and 2013. Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that
Nokia
and Samsung had a major change from 2009 to 2013. In 2009, the most popular phone was
Nokia
, which was about 449,
however
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the value abated to 425 and 250 in 2011 and 2013, respectively.
Nokia
was followed by
the
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apply
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Samsung, accounting for 225 in 2009,
for
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and for
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2011 and 2013, statistics
was
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were
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325 and 450. Apple company was the least known during 2009,
only
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with only
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25. Somehow,
this
ratio had a drastic increase in 2011 which is 99.
This
further
increased to 150 in 2013. LG was declined over the period of time, which is 120 for 2009, 98 for 2011 and 70 for 2013.
In contrast
, ZTE had
inclining
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an inclining
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graph, which is 50 in 2009 and 51 and 54 for 2011 and 2013.
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