You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. Some people think that we should divide students based on their academic ability, while others think we should educate all students together. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.
There are several number of individuals
according to
whom, instead
of educating every students
together, institutes should divides their students
on the basis of their educational qualifications. On the other hand
, several people are against this
idea. These idea may have some positive as well as
negative feedbacks, such
as more competition, it may motivate graduates to study more, some may take this
as a negative cocept and demotivates themselves. Therefore
, this
have both points of view, expalined with some relevant examples.
To commence with, if school divides children on their academic abilities, this
may increase the competition between well educated peers. This
will also
help with the improvement of the result of less intelligent children, the main reason is that people who are less intelligent will feel discriminated and motivates themselves to study harder. For instance
: many universities did some research on the same concept and saw that students
who had the poor performance earlier, after introducing this
rule, their grades were improved and they tried to perform much better than before.
On the other hand
, if the class contain every kind of students
, that is
less intelligent and a good performer with some average students
. This
may help the average and poor performers to learn better from their friends who have an excellent performace in examinations. For example
: if the class have variety of students
and teacher is praising the topper of the class, this
may motivate some sore performers to do better in his or her next examinations. This
will lead to better result of the student.
To conclude
, these both ideas will have some positive as well as
some negative development among students
. Somehow, the development will depend on the student itself, that whether she or he take these changes as a motivation or a demotivation.Submitted by khushiaggarwal255 on
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that the introduction clearly states the two opposing views and the main points that will be discussed in the essay.
task achievement
Develop your arguments with more specific examples and explanations to support your points.
lexical resource
Expand your range of vocabulary by using more precise and varied words and phrases.
grammatical range
Pay attention to grammatical accuracy, including subject-verb agreement and appropriate use of verb tenses.
Your opinion
Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.
If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.
Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.
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...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?