The maps below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today.
The given maps illustrate the radical changes that have taken place in Grange
Park
from 1920 until now. Overall
, the park
has been developed under the trend of relocation and modernization.
Regarding the centre of the map, it is notable that the entrances, which used to be located to the north and south of the park
in 1920, stayed unchanged. A large central rose garden has been added in the area where the fountain was previously located. Many seats used to be scattered around the park
have been concentrated around the rose bed, which makes it more convenient for visitors to sit. To the left of the rose center
, it can be clearly seen that the stage for musicians has been converted into a modern amphitheatre for concerts.
Other alternations have taken place of the rose garden and the pond, including the construction of the café and children’s play area. Change the spelling
centre
Moreover
, the glasshouse has also
become flattened, which makes room for a water feature. Next to it, a new entrance underground car park
has been opened, which makes it much more favourable for visitors.Submitted by my251e3 on
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