Students should choose a university major that prepares them as high paying careers. To what extent do you agree with this statement.

No one can fathom how education is an integral system of a society, nation, or individual. Education
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proven to be a great force for the advancement of human civilization.
However
, the question is to what extent of complexity will students undertake to achieve satisfactory high-end jobs? Many people believe that learners must enrol in universities and take four-year bachelor courses or upgrade to master's to become financially free. I totally agree with
this
notion. To start with, many
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do not believe that education is the key to having a successful career.
For example
, many billionaires in our recent society have been successful in their businesses even though they are college dropouts like Steve Jobs and Bill Gates.
Although
they have not finished a major subject and received diplomas, they have gained valuable experiences that have catapulted their success in acquiring wealth and financial freedom.
As well as
, they carry a great amount of determination, skills, and strong character to rise up from defeat to be great in their chosen field.
Furthermore
, most population invest in tertiary teaching to equip them with skills and knowledge that would help them enjoy high-end
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jobs. Like most of my childhood friends, they have their diplomas, now they work as captains, managers, and top-lead engineers. Having
this
kind of training exposes them to different interests in their chosen field. They are
also
connected with communities that share a common goal and language which helps in their ambitions to have a stable life.
To conclude
, I totally agree that having a major tertiary study will help an individual gain victory in attaining success in life, as
this
will equip them with knowledge and understanding and will connect them with
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who are willing to help them walk the way of life they want.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • university major
  • high paying careers
  • long-term satisfaction
  • fulfillment
  • factors
  • potential
  • income
  • passion
  • interest
  • success
  • job satisfaction
  • transferable skills
  • balance
  • personal interests
  • financial stability
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